Aa~nd I'm here again. XD

So, now I can't wait what happens next. Unfortunately I have no time to read more today, but maybe later...

And, that was really huge turn. I stared at the page kind of the long time as Jian thought: "they nuked us". And that was my first though too.
Was that a Indiana Jones reference I spotted there? XD
You keep Jian delightfully human, just like anyone us could be. And he is strong, becouse I could go mad if I saw what he did.
Thanks for writing this and keep going.